Replaced Thoughts
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Very clever, maybe even therapeutic.  The shifted negations are very neat.

(I played around with it a little bit to see if capitalizations as well as periods could be made to fit both sentence structures, but no luck.  What you did, using traditional poetry typography, is probably optimal; going e e cummings would make the periods look odd Thumbsup .)
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Replaced Thoughts - by Torkelburger - 07-02-2022, 04:25 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by dukealien - 07-02-2022, 05:16 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by rowens - 07-02-2022, 07:30 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by Torkelburger - 07-02-2022, 10:45 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by busker - 07-02-2022, 12:37 PM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by rowens - 07-03-2022, 01:41 AM



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