Replaced Thoughts
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Replaced Thoughts

There's something wrong with me that needs to be fixed.
For you cannot persuade me that
I can love myself despite other's opinions of me.
Because when all is said and done
Nobody loves me.
Therefore, it is pointless to think that
I will never give up on myself.
Because I always remember each day that
I have no friends.
And I will no longer deceive my own mind when I pretend that
The present moment is all that matters.
So, the simple fact remains that
I'll always be depressed.
What is more, I have trouble accepting the fact that
It is not the things I do that give me worth.
Hence, when I look deep inside, I wonder--
Is there something wrong with me?

(Now read the entire poem in reverse, from the bottom line towards the top).
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Replaced Thoughts - by Torkelburger - 07-02-2022, 04:25 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by dukealien - 07-02-2022, 05:16 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by rowens - 07-02-2022, 07:30 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by Torkelburger - 07-02-2022, 10:45 AM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by busker - 07-02-2022, 12:37 PM
RE: Replaced Thoughts - by rowens - 07-03-2022, 01:41 AM



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