Semi

[brynmawr1]

No more
than empty–
pulsating the center star

Hand in hand silence,
dreaming                               "Hooded silence of dreams"   or "Blind silence" etc.

Frozen cotton
to the void–



Romance
and pessimism,

hand in hand;

pulsating
the center star

 No more whole

than empty–

pulsating in the center star



Hand in hand silence,

eyes shut,

dreaming 



Frozen cotton

taken into the void–







Romance

and pessimism,



hand in hand silence;



pulsating
in the center star 

Hi Semi,
Just one small suggestion if you wanted to keep the "eyes shut" connotation from the original.
Take care,
bryn