Semi

[Semicircle]

No more whole
than empty–
pulsating in the center star

Or, 

No less whole
than empty–
pulsating the center star



Hand in hand silence,
eyes shut,
dreaming 

Frozen cotton
taken into the void–

in or to

Romance
and pessimism,

hand in hand silence;

pulsating
in the center star

Or,

hand in hand;

in the center star




That's what occurred to me. 

Thank you Rowens, your tips always sharpen my work.

I have a bit to learn from you when it comes to critiqueing.