I'm Not Nice

[Semicircle]

I'm Not Nice



So many of the people know what is correct .... unecessary reiterating for the nice people
the nice people, they make things,
funny artwork and writings 
pointing out all
the things
they're not.

They know. They are doing what nice people do, ..... 'they know' juxtaposed with the following statement is a bit confusing upon reread
pander to other nice people with evidence
that they know what they know
about what's pathetic,
in great detail.

It's nice to know.
To know and know                       
and know some more.     ...... people who think they have a wide skillset are almost always arrogent, it's hard talking with people like that.

That's what nice people do.
They know what's correct.
And if all the awful people and awful characteristics went away
and only they were left,
they'd recall with dismay all the horrible things they know and continue living doing the same thing they're doing now   .... this was phrased in a strange way, could be shortenned down to living, or something else. Artist's choice however.
in case the pathetic reoccurs somewhere.

If you see me, say what you want, that's what I'm here for,
for you anyway. You can get from me your best.     .... again, unecessary reiteration
My heroes were all egotists. Mock me for wanting to be like them.

I always thought the mentality of, "I'm an egoist, let me tell you about it!" was funny.

Your writing style looks very impromptu and natural, so if I muddled it, blame my conventional niceness. The reiteration can be shortenned to make the poem read quicker imo.

The second and third strophe seem to be repeating themselves, possibly because that's what nice people do.