High sun
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High 
sun
settles   everyday the streets flooded


if everyday is a play on everyday things being every day



colours    student’s


probably not a play on singular and plural. mostly 


backpacks        joy and terror    go on

it's a case where joy and terror says little, and reminds of little children

monotonous hours
hunger and heave
over idle feet

heaving idly is good play



full with standing

The last line, you get to, and can reassess whatever may have bothered you above it.
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Messages In This Thread
High sun - by Miley - 06-05-2022, 04:20 PM
RE: High sun - by dukealien - 06-06-2022, 03:53 AM
RE: High sun - by rowens - 06-26-2022, 01:30 AM
RE: High sun - by SnarlingThroughOurSmiles - 07-11-2022, 06:26 AM
RE: High sun - by CRNDLSM - 08-16-2022, 09:46 AM



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