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Kingdom of the Sun(new title and edit)

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06-24-2022, 04:28 AM

Not much of a rework, but I've put in a new ending that I hope is more interesting.

Thanks again for everyone's past comments.

Bryn

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Kingdom of the Sun(new title and edit) - by brynmawr1 - 06-01-2022, 11:54 AM

RE: My Patio - by Semicircle - 06-01-2022, 02:14 PM

RE: My Patio - by Knot - 06-01-2022, 11:00 PM

RE: My Patio - by brynmawr1 - 06-02-2022, 01:43 AM

RE: My Patio - by TranquillityBase - 06-02-2022, 08:03 AM

RE: My Patio - by brynmawr1 - 06-02-2022, 10:17 AM

RE: Patio Distractions - by Mark A Becker - 06-02-2022, 10:32 AM

RE: Patio Distractions - by brynmawr1 - 06-02-2022, 01:32 PM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by Knot - 06-02-2022, 08:17 PM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by brynmawr1 - 06-03-2022, 03:40 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by Mark A Becker - 06-02-2022, 08:35 PM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by Knot - 06-03-2022, 09:05 PM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by brynmawr1 - 06-04-2022, 05:07 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by Miley - 06-05-2022, 03:43 PM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 2) - by brynmawr1 - 06-06-2022, 05:15 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 3) - by TranquillityBase - 06-06-2022, 08:02 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 3) - by brynmawr1 - 06-06-2022, 11:36 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 3) - by Tiger the Lion - 06-06-2022, 09:52 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 3) - by Knot - 06-06-2022, 11:42 PM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 3) - by brynmawr1 - 06-08-2022, 03:02 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (edit 3) - by Knot - 06-09-2022, 01:32 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (new ending) - by brynmawr1 - 06-24-2022, 04:28 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (new ending) - by busker - 06-24-2022, 05:36 AM

RE: Follow the Sun (new ending) - by brynmawr1 - 06-24-2022, 07:37 AM

RE: Kingdom of the Sun(new title and edit) - by brynmawr1 - 12-11-2022, 02:16 PM

RE: Kingdom of the Sun(new title and edit) - by TranquillityBase - 12-11-2022, 11:07 PM

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