06-21-2022, 08:03 AM
I was making a joke.
The backseat gaze is the moon.
So backseat rhymes with noon in a reality that is jovial.
The backseat gaze is the moon.
So backseat rhymes with noon in a reality that is jovial.
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Draft 2: Moment Cycle Wash (Petrarchan Sonnet)
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Draft 2: Moment Cycle Wash (Petrarchan Sonnet) - by alonso ramoran - 06-18-2022, 02:43 AM
RE: Moment Cycle Wash - by rowens - 06-18-2022, 06:45 AM
RE: Moment Cycle Wash - by busker - 06-18-2022, 12:05 PM
RE: Draft 2: Moment Cycle Wash (Petrarchan Sonnet) - by alonso ramoran - 06-21-2022, 03:17 AM
RE: Draft 2: Moment Cycle Wash (Petrarchan Sonnet) - by rowens - 06-21-2022, 08:03 AM
RE: Draft 2: Moment Cycle Wash (Petrarchan Sonnet) - by alonso ramoran - 06-21-2022, 08:35 AM
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