Draft 2: Moment Cycle Wash (Petrarchan Sonnet)

[alonso ramoran]

busker, rowens,

Thank you for the feedback. Rowens, I wasn't too sure about what your comments on the noon/moon rhyme meant and how noon implies the moon through its rhyme, so I kept those rhymes for this draft at least. I can make changes in future rewrites if you clarify and I happen to agree with you.

Best,
Alex