Beacon
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Thanks for the thoughts here, basically the poem is just about long forgotten dreams suddenly popping into your head months or years after dreaming them - often they're single images for me, or they could be multiple dreams combined into one - I love that. I wanted the last stanza to be the dreams popping in out of nowhere, beautiful incomplete fragment memories.

I think it could be made more clear, but dreams aren't clear, so should it be clear? It's probably not the best poem, I might try and improve it but I don't know how to do it in the spirit of the idea.
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Beacon - by Wjames - 01-03-2022, 03:54 PM
RE: Beacon - by Knot - 01-05-2022, 10:49 PM
RE: Beacon - by Mark A Becker - 01-07-2022, 11:56 AM
RE: Beacon - by Wjames - 06-17-2022, 06:20 AM
RE: Beacon - by alonso ramoran - 06-18-2022, 02:40 AM
RE: Beacon - by busker - 06-18-2022, 12:14 PM



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