06-17-2022, 06:20 AM
Thanks for the thoughts here, basically the poem is just about long forgotten dreams suddenly popping into your head months or years after dreaming them - often they're single images for me, or they could be multiple dreams combined into one - I love that. I wanted the last stanza to be the dreams popping in out of nowhere, beautiful incomplete fragment memories.
I think it could be made more clear, but dreams aren't clear, so should it be clear? It's probably not the best poem, I might try and improve it but I don't know how to do it in the spirit of the idea.
I think it could be made more clear, but dreams aren't clear, so should it be clear? It's probably not the best poem, I might try and improve it but I don't know how to do it in the spirit of the idea.

