out of my element

[Quixilated]

thats a pretty lazy piece of feedback - and also very dumbed down - thats the problem woth critiquing poetry - what is “ random rhymes” to one person ( a person that does not know or attempt to understand where the writer is coming from) is a meaninful string of thought and feeling captured at a moment of reflection for the writer - I assume youre not a fan of “ rap music” and took this oppurtunity to give lazy feedback and jab at it  which this is obviously isnt theres no chorus music or anything - it just happens to rhyme - pretty surprised i thought this was a serious site

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