All I've Got Left Is Time Travel No. 2
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(06-05-2022, 08:22 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  where the Sun God rests his hands
worn rough from making mountains.
Is sublime. 
The rest of the poem has arresting images, but what I think is missing is an exploration of what it all means, of the inner lives of these men and women from times past. Or something like that. A second layer of meaning below the mere circumstance of hunting and killing.

Is the poet and therefore the reader merely observing? It would banal, if so.
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RE: All I've Got Left Is Time Travel No. 2 - by busker - 06-07-2022, 09:29 PM



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