All I've Got Left Is Time Travel No. 2
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(06-07-2022, 06:40 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  
(06-06-2022, 09:27 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  OK, I've absented myself.  Last line.....I'm still working on.  But it says what I want to say.

TqB
Go for it Tim,
Looking forward to more of this series. It’s such a cool idea.

“… where the Sun God rests his hands
worn rough from making mountains”


Those are flat out terrific lines.
Mark
Thanks.  I've done one more edit, with a new last line.

Tim
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RE: All I've Got Left Is Time Travel No. 2 - by TranquillityBase - 06-07-2022, 07:45 AM



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