06-07-2022, 07:45 AM
(06-07-2022, 06:40 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:Thanks. I've done one more edit, with a new last line.(06-06-2022, 09:27 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: OK, I've absented myself. Last line.....I'm still working on. But it says what I want to say.Go for it Tim,
TqB
Looking forward to more of this series. It’s such a cool idea.
“… where the Sun God rests his hands
worn rough from making mountains”
Those are flat out terrific lines.
Mark
Tim

