All I've Got Left Is Time Travel No. 2

[Mark A Becker]

I've posted first stab at a revision.  TqB

I think you’re missing an opportunity for powerful work, Tim.
You do NOT need to be in these scenes, unless you want them to appear like the reader/viewer is looking at a selfie.

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Hi Tim-
I was thinking along these lines:

Found stone points embedded in the hillside...

Dogs are barking
the feathered shafts come quickly
Buffalo scatter
surrounded by their oceanic prairie
where the Sun God rests his hands
worn rough from making mountains.

Drums sound the celebration
of hunt and conquest
of carcasses motionless
and the shouts and songs of the hunters.

... but words come too late
from an unseen future.