Black on Bone White

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Black on Bone White 

At dusk, black wasps
swarm a hanging basket
filled with deer antlers 
and the skeleton of a fawn.

Hey Tim,
Maybe "Black On Bone WHite" could be the title. ??        yes

"the skeleton of a fawn."
This line added, I think, and I was sorry to see it cut.  It could be the last line of the poem, as the new replacements have much less impact.
I wasn't sure if "skeleton of a fawn" was too much.  Glad to see you feel it's not.  I'm pretty much taking on your version.

As you know, I'm a big fan of short poem/observations.
And we're glad you are 

Mark