06-03-2022, 08:27 AM
(06-03-2022, 03:01 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Sunday, early Spring-These could almost be four separate poems.
morning opens like a rose,
welcoming the sun.
...
An afternoon stroll-
wild ponies crossing the marsh
by loblolly pines.
...
Sun beaming through trees
as our shadows stretch eastward,
tall grass waves good-bye.
...
Shadows enhancing
what a body’s language for-
waltzing with the moon.
I do trip over "what a body's language for" everytime I read it.
If it was 4 poems, my far favorites would be 2 and 3.

