Daffodil
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(05-27-2022, 10:22 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  Daffodils,
Dapper gents in yellow hats
prefer verdant pants,
flirt with bees to
shun a jealous sun.

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Just a note to say I really like the whimsicality of this version.  I wouldn't change it.
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Daffodil - by brynmawr1 - 05-26-2022, 11:32 PM
RE: Daffodil - by Semicircle - 05-27-2022, 01:19 AM
RE: Daffodil - by busker - 05-27-2022, 01:29 AM
RE: Daffodil - by Mark A Becker - 05-27-2022, 04:03 AM
RE: Daffodil - by brynmawr1 - 05-27-2022, 06:26 AM
RE: Daffodil - by Mark A Becker - 05-27-2022, 06:57 AM
RE: Daffodil - by brynmawr1 - 05-27-2022, 10:22 AM
RE: Daffodil - by TranquillityBase - 05-27-2022, 10:17 PM



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