Uvalde

Uvalde

Knot

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05-25-2022, 09:00 PM

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Hi TqB,

a terrific start and close,
I wonder if you need the middle?

A damaged child
becomes a catastrophic man

The senseless made so sensible
at the point of a gun.

(Certainly worth polishing)

Best, Knot

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Uvalde - by TranquillityBase - 05-25-2022, 06:17 PM

RE: Uvalde - by Knot - 05-25-2022, 09:00 PM

RE: Uvalde - by TranquillityBase - 05-25-2022, 09:44 PM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-25-2022, 09:16 PM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-25-2022, 10:04 PM

RE: Uvalde - by CRNDLSM - 05-26-2022, 12:19 AM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-26-2022, 01:50 AM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-26-2022, 07:06 AM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-27-2022, 07:02 AM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-27-2022, 08:43 PM

RE: Uvalde - by CRNDLSM - 05-27-2022, 09:27 PM

RE: Uvalde - by TranquillityBase - 05-27-2022, 11:18 PM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-28-2022, 02:59 AM

RE: Uvalde - by TranquillityBase - 05-28-2022, 10:02 PM

RE: Uvalde - by TranquillityBase - 05-30-2022, 11:41 PM

RE: Uvalde - by Mark A Becker - 05-31-2022, 01:26 AM

RE: Uvalde - by busker - 05-31-2022, 07:23 PM

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