05-24-2022, 05:25 AM
(05-15-2022, 06:31 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote:No need to explain. Thanks for a peek under the hood of your V6 turbo charged imagination!(05-15-2022, 12:19 PM)brynmawr1 Wrote: As you know, I am new at this. Wouldn't have guessed thatThanks for giving it a read and responding. I am not setting out to be obscure, this is just how it comes out in my attempts to communicate in an unfiltered way the strangeness of the world as I feel it at a particular moment. For me, these lines and images do connect and tell a story, but if you asked me to explain it, I couldn't.
I like the rhythm and imagery of the rest of the poem, but I have to admit I'm not sure what you are trying to say. Maybe that's the point!
Thanks.


