Afternoons of an Agnostic version 3
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Thanks Bryn.  I took to heart your comment about too man "and"s and "as"s.  As always new lines and word choices occurred to me, and I tried to make it more clear with a few cuts.

Thanks for sticking with me.

Tim

(05-20-2022, 03:04 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  Good edit Tim.
That title change is perfect, it has solved a lot of issues, simple and effective.

Mark
Muchas gracias, Mark.
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Messages In This Thread
RE: Afternoon of an Atheist - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2022, 09:30 AM
RE: Afternoon of an Atheist - by Magpie - 05-18-2022, 05:19 AM
RE: Afternoon of an Atheist - by brynmawr1 - 05-18-2022, 10:37 AM
RE: Afternoon of an Atheist - by TranquillityBase - 05-20-2022, 02:52 AM
RE: Afternoons of an Agnostic - by Magpie - 05-20-2022, 03:04 AM
RE: Afternoons of an Agnostic - by brynmawr1 - 05-20-2022, 05:02 AM
RE: Afternoons of an Agnostic version 3 - by TranquillityBase - 05-20-2022, 10:27 PM



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