Over-dozed

[Knot]

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Hi Mark,

I agree with you about the pipeline (thanks for explaining.) The pain not so much. It doesn't really tell us enough about the visitor, and since the OD seems accidental, what does it matter? Worse, perhaps, it reads like an invitation to sympathy and just a little manipulative.

Maybe, just for clarity, expand the verse a little?

mumbling about how much,

how clean, 'bout hitting

the pipeline, watching

dark crimson surge

to fill the barrel - and heaven

cascading through the walls

Best, Knot

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