Pursuit edit Final(for now)

Pursuit edit Final(for now)

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05-17-2022, 08:16 PM

I wrote this poem for a boat dedication ceremony honoring my wife this coming Sunday. I am going to read it aloud so any final suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks for all of the help offered so far.

Bryn

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Pursuit edit Final(for now) - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2022, 10:10 AM

RE: Pursuit - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2022, 11:27 PM

RE: Pursuit - by Magpie - 05-12-2022, 01:09 AM

RE: Pursuit edit 1 - by brynmawr1 - 05-12-2022, 08:34 AM

RE: Pursuit edit 1 - by TranquillityBase - 05-13-2022, 01:18 AM

RE: Pursuit edit 1 - by brynmawr1 - 05-13-2022, 06:19 AM

RE: Pursuit - by Magpie - 05-12-2022, 02:23 PM

RE: Pursuit - by brynmawr1 - 05-13-2022, 01:37 AM

RE: Pursuit - by Quixilated - 05-14-2022, 05:10 AM

RE: Pursuit edit - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2022, 08:16 PM

RE: Pursuit edit - by Knot - 05-17-2022, 09:24 PM

RE: Pursuit edit - by brynmawr1 - 05-18-2022, 12:30 AM

RE: Pursuit edit - by Knot - 05-18-2022, 01:00 AM

RE: Pursuit edit - by brynmawr1 - 05-18-2022, 01:43 AM

RE: Pursuit edit4 - by Knot - 05-18-2022, 09:31 PM

RE: Pursuit edit4 - by brynmawr1 - 05-18-2022, 10:44 PM

RE: Pursuit edit4 - by Knot - 05-18-2022, 11:54 PM

RE: Pursuit edit4 - by Magpie - 05-23-2022, 08:47 PM

RE: Pursuit edit4 - by brynmawr1 - 05-24-2022, 12:03 AM

RE: Pursuit edit Final(for now) - by Knot - 05-24-2022, 02:05 AM

RE: Pursuit edit Final(for now) - by brynmawr1 - 05-25-2022, 07:57 AM

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