Good for Nothings

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As you know, I am new at this.  Wouldn't have guessed that 

I like the rhythm and imagery of the rest of the poem, but I have to admit I'm not sure what you are trying to say.  Maybe that's the point!

Thanks.

Thanks for giving it a read and responding. I am not setting out to be obscure, this is just how it comes out in my attempts to communicate in an unfiltered way the strangeness of the world as I feel it at a particular moment. For me, these lines and images do connect and tell a story, but if you asked me to explain it, I couldn't.