04-30-2022, 04:37 AM
(04-30-2022, 04:07 AM)Velasco Wrote: Let conquerors who taste every spring,Hey Velasco. Very well done. I'm not ready with a line by line at this moment but I'll be back. Just wanted to say that "smell of hose water" immediately transported me back forty years. Fantastic image. I just wrote 4 haiku ending with that line and I'm a little jealous it belongs to you.
expecting youth, turn to dead marble—
I'll leave your memory
in rainbows that smell of hose water
to forget you in the way
the wind remembers breath.
I'll be back.Paul