04-29-2022, 06:05 AM
Hey semi slicer-
I really like the first two lines, but the rhymes that follow are long stretches for a short piece.
Throwing stuff up to see if it sticks is fine, but this one bounced right off.
… Mark
I really like the first two lines, but the rhymes that follow are long stretches for a short piece.
Throwing stuff up to see if it sticks is fine, but this one bounced right off.
… Mark