Soylent Green

[Magpie]

Someone told me about this film recently because it's set in 2022, not had a chance to see it yet so can't really comment on the actual content of your poem.
however i'm thinking that you could drop 'that' and 'of' is a typo should be 'off', also i would lose the punctuation from short pieces like this unless it is totally necessary, but that's just my preference.

cheers for the read
mark