04-09-2022, 07:42 AM
(04-09-2022, 03:09 AM)Xlateralus Wrote: Jim died last Tuesday,Jim must be a pretty stinky guy to always smell like death.
but it could have been any particular day
He wasn’t very particular about life he said
“I’ve seen it all” which from my point of view
was odd.
A lonesome 35 year old line cook left a lot on the linen.
jim died last tuesday but his stench was reborn today
a bloated mess on a sheetless mattress
I don't think reborn is the word you're looking for,
small nitpick.