03-26-2022, 07:42 AM
(03-26-2022, 02:11 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Little oil slick,A little ghoulish*, but hangs together well and ends on an interesting note.
Bedazzled in rainbow bands,
Vibrating by the rumble
of my engine.
Mid center
floats a bloated worm "drowns"?
gracefully pirouetting
on undulating ripples.
The oil seeps into the worm
by morning,
along with the colors–
I don’t think
I would’ve mentioned the worm
without the colors.
*I couldn't be indifferent to a worm caught in a pool of oil, as this Narrator is. Admittedly, I'm an odd ball. So consider the source
