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(03-26-2022, 02:11 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  Little oil slick,
Bedazzled in rainbow bands,
Vibrating by the rumble 
of my engine.


Mid center
floats a bloated worm            "drowns"?
gracefully pirouetting
on undulating ripples.


The oil seeps into the worm
by morning,
along with the colors–


I don’t think 
I would’ve mentioned the worm
without the colors.

A little ghoulish*, but hangs together well and ends on an interesting note.

*I couldn't be indifferent to a worm caught in a pool of oil, as this Narrator is.  Admittedly, I'm an odd ball.  So consider the source  Wink
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Stain - by Semicircle - 03-26-2022, 02:11 AM
RE: Stain - by rowens - 03-26-2022, 02:53 AM
RE: Stain - by TranquillityBase - 03-26-2022, 07:42 AM



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