03-20-2022, 03:20 AM
(03-20-2022, 12:36 AM)Knot Wrote: .Hi Knot.
Hi AR.
Not helpful, I know, but I preferred the ambiguity (though I hadn't thought of a traffic jam, just the guitar and the neck of a bottle).
Best, Knot
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I like both versions now. I wanted the first version to start with 'bottleneck' and end with 'free' as they are a kind of opposite.
But I understand the confusion for some with the ambiguity.
Still not too sure when ambiguity is a good thing... I'm inclined to think, always.
Cheers, mark
wae aye man ye radgie
