bottleneck guitar

[Semicircle]

I like the usage of, 'a human singing'
makes it sound like the narrator
really is enjoying what he is doing,
which I assume to be strangulation.

not quite strangulation - just playing slide guitar
although i wanted it to be ambiguous, i thought that people might think i was speaking about a traffic jam.
back to the drawing board

mark

The ambiguity of that first line serves to distract from an otherwise fine poem

Oh I understand now, yeah, bottleneck is a bit confusing.

Maybe a different title would suit.

cus' I thought it was about erotic asphyxiation.