03-18-2022, 11:28 PM
(09-05-2021, 01:45 PM)Kingsausage1778 Wrote: There be monsters here,The poem was kind of redundant with the
lurking in dark corners,
permeating torment;................ Maybe 'shrouds'?
Farting the stench of rot.
There be monsters here,
They prick the mind, and eat the body, I can't visualize prick here
They rape the soul, and infect the spirit. Cliche
There be monsters here,
They giggle and whisper,
They masturbate and conspire.
There be monsters here,........................consider this.
Always has been,
Always will be
At night
they and I converge
cus'
there be monsters here.
'they do this and they do that'
I feel like you could expand on the relationship between
the relationship of the narrator and the monsters.
Needs work.
Thanks for the read,
SC.

