03-11-2022, 04:15 AM
(09-05-2020, 01:01 AM)Torkelburger Wrote: Celestial Ascent (Lai form)I liked this one, gives a clear visual.
appearing so soon
some hours after noon
dark skies
hear a robin's tune
above the lagoon
will rise
like a white balloon
seeing the full moon
a prize Not my favorite rhyme, kind of weak.
Trimmed some of the fat,
yours SC.