03-02-2022, 01:19 AM
Thanks, TqB.
'bland' is a poor choice, I agree.
The feedback on 'affectation' was useful. I was going for the negative spin, but it's good to have a reader's perspective on how it clashes with the rest of the poem.
'bland' is a poor choice, I agree.
The feedback on 'affectation' was useful. I was going for the negative spin, but it's good to have a reader's perspective on how it clashes with the rest of the poem.