Still
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(02-24-2022, 10:20 AM)rowens Wrote:  From the walls 
A scritch scratch–
(scritch scratch)

thin

On the floor
A drip drop–
(drip drop)

fatty, and, weighty


Lumpy blankets
Containing a bed of mice.


Thickness of life-realty/reality


Squeak squeak–
(squeak squeak)

The same same


Groaning house;
Aching, breathing,
Cold fingertips wafting.


Screaming, scratching, crying–
Silence.


Quiet sniffles
(sniffle sniffle)


Stuck in the sensations of still being still

Are you playing with the layers of lonely places here?
Yes indeed. I want to give a sense of loneliness off of most of my poems.
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Still - by Semicircle - 02-23-2022, 12:55 PM
RE: Still - by rowens - 02-24-2022, 10:20 AM
RE: Still - by Semicircle - 02-24-2022, 12:13 PM



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