02-24-2022, 12:13 PM
(02-24-2022, 10:20 AM)rowens Wrote: From the wallsYes indeed. I want to give a sense of loneliness off of most of my poems.
A scritch scratch–
(scritch scratch)
thin
On the floor
A drip drop–
(drip drop)
fatty, and, weighty
Lumpy blankets
Containing a bed of mice.
Thickness of life-realty/reality
Squeak squeak–
(squeak squeak)
The same same
Groaning house;
Aching, breathing,
Cold fingertips wafting.
Screaming, scratching, crying–
Silence.
Quiet sniffles–
(sniffle sniffle)
Stuck in the sensations of still being still
Are you playing with the layers of lonely places here?

