02-21-2022, 07:37 PM
(02-18-2022, 08:12 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: A Natural RemedyI like how the reader’s attention moves from the problem, to the bird, to worrying about the bird, to relief…in the end, forgetting that the poem began with something about a problem
I wanted to tell you
about a problem I had,
but got distracted
when a bird bounced
off my window.
It was an ordinary jay
who appeared
to be OK
when I looked outside
to check on it.
Momentarily startled
as me, it fully recovered
and just flew away.
But it made me forget
what I first meant to say.
The bird bouncing off the window was star(t)ling
Good one

