Love Letter

[Semicircle]

Yeah, I agree. Needed to work on something so I just slapped a bow on it and called it good.

I think the bow slapped back.  Take your time, the poem ain't in no big hurry, and any crit I offer does not require a quick response. 

More green comments, below:

Trails of ink,
blotches warping the paper.
I'm itching away at the lovebite  lower case i; "away at" could be "from"- one scratches an itch
you gave.
.. lose this
Crimson under my nails.

Pink scribbles
etched on the envelope-
overlapping hearts-
eyes peering from behind them.
watching intently.  I think " They'll be watching." worked better

I was tempted to re-write this one, but that's up to you.

I'm personally very flattered that you care enough to.

It'd be interesting to see what your take on this is 
so have at it if you want to.