Jubilee

[Tiger the Lion]

Shadows hanging from the clothesline
in the shape of people.

Consider...

Shadows the shape of people
hanging from the clothesline ( for the sh sh )

Patio chairs set around, -this is your only comma - ditch it
empty champagne glasses
scattered on the table.


Meandering piano keys 
drifting lazily through the breeze. pick one or the other and reword


Picnic blankets carried off by wind
forming multicolored clouds.