02-16-2022, 02:05 AM
Hey Tim, I love the sentiment!
It hits with more punch if I leave out some the lines in the middle
This is no way to run the Hereafter,
to send a guy back
to face a blindfolded firing squad funny as hell !
or another lifetime’s delay equally humorous
and the funny thing is
it’s not even the appointed time this actually is a funny thing
for the weeding out to begin.
Weeding out the hereafter! Love the humour in this piece! Even the title suggests that something, someone, needs straightening out. Made my day, brother.
It hits with more punch if I leave out some the lines in the middle
This is no way to run the Hereafter,
to send a guy back
to face a blindfolded firing squad funny as hell !
or another lifetime’s delay equally humorous
and the funny thing is
it’s not even the appointed time this actually is a funny thing
for the weeding out to begin.
Weeding out the hereafter! Love the humour in this piece! Even the title suggests that something, someone, needs straightening out. Made my day, brother.