Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens)

[rowens]

I think a lot of your poems have the simplicity of what it says, and doesn't need changing and elaborating.

Yeats, Hardy and Fost.

Simple as simple can be.

I think you would do well in that area.

I think I would too.
I think I do my best just north of Bukowski.
And you do your best as unrhymed Larkin.

You get loads out of mythology.

I am into local folklore.

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That dragging a cloud part was what I remembered from an earlier draft. If you left out the word 'canvas'.