1st Annual Poems About Pets Month
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(02-09-2022, 10:59 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  I thought I May Have Spread You Too Thin,

but no;

every year
the lilac sings spring
like a diva,

the Japanese maple
yawns with red glory

and the hydrangeas 
bring their party balloons
of pink and blue.

They tell me you're not colorblind anymore.
At first I thought the title was too long, but when I read it as the first line, it works perfectly. (A simple comma placed just right)
I absolutely love the imagery and subtle sentiment expressed here.
A simple, yet glorious poem that gets better with every read.

Thanks Paul,
Mark

ps. a suggestion, perhaps "bows" instead of "yawns" ? My Japanese maple seemed to almost bow in the spring, which I found to be a delightful metaphor for the Japanese custom of bowing.
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Messages In This Thread
RE: 1st Annual Poems About Pets Month - by rowens - 02-01-2022, 08:07 AM
RE: 1st Annual Poems About Pets Month - by rowens - 02-01-2022, 08:38 AM
RE: 1st Annual Poems About Pets Month - by Mark A Becker - 02-10-2022, 12:03 AM
RE: 1st Annual Poems About Pets Month - by rowens - 02-24-2022, 11:18 AM



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