02-10-2022, 12:03 AM
(02-09-2022, 10:59 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: I thought I May Have Spread You Too Thin,At first I thought the title was too long, but when I read it as the first line, it works perfectly. (A simple comma placed just right)
but no;
every year
the lilac sings spring
like a diva,
the Japanese maple
yawns with red glory
and the hydrangeas
bring their party balloons
of pink and blue.
They tell me you're not colorblind anymore.
I absolutely love the imagery and subtle sentiment expressed here.
A simple, yet glorious poem that gets better with every read.
Thanks Paul,
Mark
ps. a suggestion, perhaps "bows" instead of "yawns" ? My Japanese maple seemed to almost bow in the spring, which I found to be a delightful metaphor for the Japanese custom of bowing.

