Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens)

Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens)

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02-08-2022, 10:18 AM

Good job busker-
The added imagery helps this piece a lot, especially this section:

We sheltered under ruined battlements,
heard tinkling cowbells pass us by,
the gurgling mouths of momentary waterfalls,
and saw the ancient sea through curtains of rain

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Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by busker - 01-29-2022, 02:21 PM

RE: Iasos - by Mark A Becker - 01-29-2022, 10:23 PM

RE: Iasos - by busker - 01-30-2022, 12:35 PM

RE: Iasos (Edit 1.0, Mark) - by busker - 02-08-2022, 07:38 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 1.0, Mark) - by Mark A Becker - 02-08-2022, 10:18 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 1.0, Mark) - by Knot - 02-08-2022, 10:58 PM

RE: Iasos (Edit 1.0, Mark) - by rowens - 02-13-2022, 06:53 PM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by busker - 03-26-2022, 08:27 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by rowens - 03-26-2022, 09:36 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by busker - 03-26-2022, 10:05 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by rowens - 03-26-2022, 10:10 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by Knot - 03-26-2022, 09:23 PM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by busker - 03-27-2022, 05:45 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by rowens - 03-27-2022, 10:14 AM

RE: Iasos (Edit 2.0, Mark, Knot, Rowens) - by busker - 03-27-2022, 03:53 PM

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