01-28-2022, 09:36 AM
Betwixt and between is where we would walk
The last part of the poem seems like a novel
Allowing the equilibrium to rock
Listening to the quiet voice within
Answer queries from where we would begin
I get this part though things don't "rock", until after they do, that's to be remembered, or better forgotten
Necessary deviation from a path we know well
Falls
Concealed by the colored paradigms that flavors the tale
This line doesn't continue
Enticing the spirit to pay heed to the mind
Philosophical
Dreaming of a paradise we hope we can find.
So far, this line is out of it
Perhaps if and when we look beyond that which fits tight
Digging into vernacular
Overcoming fears of the unknown living in light
Languishing in shadows for the shifting perception
Articulating our diction to ears of conception
Reiterating to reverberate our future pasts
Intricately designed and created by us to be passed
Kind of starburst. An explosion of sonic reason.
Toward our progeny who sometimes miss the catch
Inwardly wishing that our history could scratch
Entanglements to the dark laws of their fathers
Syncopated chains of secrecy that smothers
Balanced Polarities …
The last part of the poem seems like a novel