Go/no go
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(01-24-2022, 07:13 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  I like that this feels both organic and mechanical at the same time. I think "Go" and "No Go" should be capitalized or in italics - would add clarity starting in L2. ( I took a second to remind myself that go was a noun here) Caps might smooth the read.
Thanks Tiger.  I had them italicized at one point.  Comma noted too.
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Go/no go - by TranquillityBase - 01-24-2022, 03:10 AM
RE: Go/no go - by Tiger the Lion - 01-24-2022, 07:13 AM
RE: Go/no go - by TranquillityBase - 01-24-2022, 07:38 AM
RE: Go/no go - by Mark A Becker - 01-25-2022, 12:01 AM
RE: Go/no go - by TranquillityBase - 01-25-2022, 01:09 AM



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