01-24-2022, 07:38 AM
(01-24-2022, 07:13 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: I like that this feels both organic and mechanical at the same time. I think "Go" and "No Go" should be capitalized or in italics - would add clarity starting in L2. ( I took a second to remind myself that go was a noun here) Caps might smooth the read.Thanks Tiger. I had them italicized at one point. Comma noted too.

