Balanced Polarities
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(01-13-2022, 07:09 PM)DragonBlue Wrote:  Betwixt and between is where we would walk
Allowing the equilibrium to rock
Listening to the quiet voice within
Answer queries from where we would begin
Is the quiet voice or the walk rocking the equilibrium, is the we the N and voice?
Necessary deviation from a path we know well
Concealed by the colored paradigms that flavors the tale is the tale the walk with the voice? Concealed by flavored colors
Enticing the spirit to pay heed to the mind
Dreaming of a paradise we hope we can find.
 
im not certain if I am dreaming, or trying not to dream.  It's very dreamy
Perhaps if and when we look beyond that which fits tight 
Overcoming fears of the unknown living in light living fears that fit tight in shadows
Languishing in shadows for the shifting perception
Articulating our diction to ears of conception
I don't understand ears of conception, this the we voice on the walk listening back to your voice?
Reiterating to reverberate our future pasts
Intricately designed and created by us to be passed 
Toward our progeny who sometimes miss the catch
Inwardly wishing that our history could scratch
Entanglements to the dark laws of their fathers our progeny, are we the dark fathers?
Syncopated chains of secrecy that smothers
 
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I like the sounds but the dreamy state makes it very hard for me to piece each line together, the possible metaphors , ambiguous pronouns, and maybe it's perfect as is, is this the path less traveled, full of color that balances the shadows?
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Balanced Polarities - by DragonBlue - 01-13-2022, 07:09 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by busker - 01-13-2022, 07:24 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by TranquillityBase - 01-13-2022, 11:00 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by DragonBlue - 01-14-2022, 05:17 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Mark A Becker - 01-15-2022, 06:23 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Xlateralus - 01-18-2022, 02:13 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by DragonBlue - 01-20-2022, 07:12 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2022, 07:57 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by CRNDLSM - 01-24-2022, 03:09 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by rowens - 01-28-2022, 09:36 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Semicircle - 03-10-2022, 02:58 AM



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