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01-22-2022, 11:14 PM
(01-22-2022, 10:37 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: You're a half foot shy in the final line but I can't tell if it was intentional or just got stuck in the snow.I knew that the last line was "5" instead of "6" syllables, thus "ruining" the "8-6, 8-6" structure, but didn't think another syllable would add anything. |
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View From My Window - by Mark A Becker - 01-22-2022, 09:59 PM
RE: View From My Window - by Tiger the Lion - 01-22-2022, 10:37 PM
RE: View From My Window - by Mark A Becker - 01-22-2022, 11:14 PM
RE: View From My Window - by dukealien - 01-22-2022, 11:25 PM
RE: View From My Window - by Mark A Becker - 01-22-2022, 11:41 PM
RE: View From My Window - by Tiger the Lion - 01-23-2022, 11:13 PM
RE: View From My Window - by dukealien - 01-24-2022, 11:15 PM
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