Sundowning (was Isolation)
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Hi TqB.

This is a very cool rewrite. I may have to steal this. Really like the repetition at the end.
Smile How can you steal from yourself? All I did was move things around a bit.

really like "setting" better. Have you heard of the term sunsetting in relation to older folks? It's happening to me, a restlessness at sunset.
I hadn't, but looked it up, found 'sundowning', which seems to be the same thing. Regardless, surely this (Sundowning/Sunsetting) is your title? And leave 'diminishing' the way it is. Smile

Best, Knot

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Messages In This Thread
Sundowning (was Isolation) - by TranquillityBase - 01-13-2022, 11:47 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-14-2022, 01:16 AM
RE: Isolation - by Mark A Becker - 01-14-2022, 07:56 AM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-16-2022, 11:18 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-17-2022, 01:02 AM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-18-2022, 07:47 AM
RE: Isolation - by Xlateralus - 01-18-2022, 01:58 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-18-2022, 10:09 PM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2022, 08:28 AM
RE: Isolation - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2022, 01:04 AM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-20-2022, 10:09 PM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2022, 11:11 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-20-2022, 11:31 PM



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