01-20-2022, 08:53 AM
(01-20-2022, 04:00 AM)busker Wrote: Writing poetryThe first two lines seem too blunt for the richness that starts with "on a black screen..." Any way way to say that in a more, I don't know, dreamy way?
Always, in the night
is poetry made beautiful
on a black screen, white letters
tracing your sandalled feet
around a colonial city grand as its ghosts,
moonlight glistening on its vast, nonsensical colonnades of words.
Poetry in the night
made beautiful
on a black screen....

