01-20-2022, 07:12 AM
You know I really appreciate that all of you are trying to help me with my pen, but I disagree. This is the feedback I've received on other sites. I think you just don't like rhyming poetry and my vocabulary you don't understand. So there it is
- Really like your choice of vocabulary in this piece. It's really unique, and I really enjoyed reading the whole thing.
TG Reign - Much to ponder in this exceptionally poetic piece!
Swan song -
A beautiful poem
Blue Harrison -
A lot of complexity to take in here; yet it holds its rhythm and speaks on an inner level to me where I feel comprehension is a simple thing. It is necessary to change, to move down the unchosen fork in the path; even if some of those times, it's only possible to do so in hindsight. It is never too late to learn from something. Blue
To all of you, thank you for your read, rate and review of my work.
- Really like your choice of vocabulary in this piece. It's really unique, and I really enjoyed reading the whole thing.
TG Reign - Much to ponder in this exceptionally poetic piece!
Swan song -
A beautiful poem
Blue Harrison -
A lot of complexity to take in here; yet it holds its rhythm and speaks on an inner level to me where I feel comprehension is a simple thing. It is necessary to change, to move down the unchosen fork in the path; even if some of those times, it's only possible to do so in hindsight. It is never too late to learn from something. Blue
To all of you, thank you for your read, rate and review of my work.
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