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01-20-2022, 04:11 AM

Had you posted this in NaPM previously?
I think I saw it before
I’m in two minds as to whether it’s better to have the second line split into two, but otherwise fine economy of words.
Nice!

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Casualty - by dukealien - 01-19-2022, 11:27 PM

RE: Casualty - by busker - 01-20-2022, 04:11 AM

RE: Casualty - by dukealien - 01-21-2022, 07:16 AM

RE: Casualty - by busker - 01-21-2022, 08:50 AM

RE: Casualty - by dukealien - 01-21-2022, 11:54 AM

RE: Casualty - by Tiger the Lion - 01-21-2022, 07:47 AM

RE: Casualty - by Mark A Becker - 01-22-2022, 05:59 AM

RE: Casualty - by dukealien - 01-22-2022, 11:34 PM

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