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Sundowning (was Isolation)
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01-16-2022, 11:18 PM
Thanks Mark and Knot. I've posted a revision. I did reverse the "heartbeat/sun" images because it seemed to make more sense. I agree that the middle section added little to the core of the poem, so I dropped those lines.
Inspiration has been lacking lately. I took a hiatus but it's good to be back. |
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Sundowning (was Isolation) - by TranquillityBase - 01-13-2022, 11:47 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-14-2022, 01:16 AM
RE: Isolation - by Mark A Becker - 01-14-2022, 07:56 AM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-16-2022, 11:18 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-17-2022, 01:02 AM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-18-2022, 07:47 AM
RE: Isolation - by Xlateralus - 01-18-2022, 01:58 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-18-2022, 10:09 PM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2022, 08:28 AM
RE: Isolation - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2022, 01:04 AM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-20-2022, 10:09 PM
RE: Isolation - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2022, 11:11 PM
RE: Isolation - by Knot - 01-20-2022, 11:31 PM
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